Garden-Stater's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Snowflake]

I enjoyed it. It was pretty funny and the art was good. The sound quality (voice acting, SFX, music) were good too. I also likedthe snow flake's eye twitch effect.

A couple of tiny things I think could have been improved:

1) The shadow from the "Clint Eastwoof's" (hilarious name by the way) drool, looked like a urine shadow, so it kind of killed the potential for a surprise when the dog actually urinated.
2) The motion tween of one of the skaters flipping looked weird, he just disappeared for a second like thin paper.
3) A little leg movement for the skaters would have mad eht eice skating scene a little better.

Still, all in all very entertaining and funny. By the way, I read your post on the BBS, way to stick to your deadline. (something I wish I could do) :)

killa9512 responds:

I really appreciate the review, all of this is very helpful. Thanks!

[First Vid]

I liked it. Short but funny. The humor was decent. My only issue is, it ended a little abruptly.

Still, good work. :)

SweetDave responds:

Don't worry, i am making an animation right now! This was made a few months ago, i just decided to post this yesterday.

[Facebook Problems]

I love the look, I love the animation, the evil sounding voice, and it was hilarious! :D

PixelMammoth responds:

I love this comment the most

[i miss you!]

At the risk of sounding really Sappy...

Awww.... :)

Normally I'd go over what was good and how you can improve, but Scotty covered all of that, so...

Awwww.... :D

ddavidd356 responds:

thank you :D

[Surrealeal]

This is Really Funny

The art and animation was perfectly fine. The jokes were very funny and unsettling. The references to David Lynch were a big plus too.

This definitely deserves more than 700 views.

Honeybloy responds:

Thanks, guy. I think Surrealeal is well past its peak of getting a lot more views.

[Phase 9 Episode 1]

The Video Won't Play for Me

I tried refreshing, right clicking to move it forward to play, waiting a while but it's not playing. If this is the same as the YouTube video posted on your blog, it's WAY better than you make it out to be in your description. The art is good, the vast majority of the animation is decent. Excellent job at shading. If you designed the 3d backgrounds you did a good job with that. Good work, I look forward to more of this ... and actually being able to play it without having to scout it out through your profile. :)

By the way, you mentioned that you need voice actors, check out the NG Forums, there are plenty looking to work on projects.

Kel-chan responds:

thx for the tip

[Wall of Concrete]

Good dabble into animation

I'd suggest sticking with it. There's definitely some talent here. As its own movie on newgrounds however, I don't really get the point. It's unclear exactly what's happening. That aside, the animation is smaller than the frame window. When the song loops it plays over itself. Finally, find a way to prevent the movie from looping itself over and over automatically.

riotpopper responds:

im working on the looping problem, thx for posting

[For Craig]

I like it

Decent movie and art. I'd hate to be Craig.

TyyobrO responds:

Thanks man, but I don't know... Craig gave me a ten :)