Garden-Stater's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[character walk]

Looks good

If you're new at animating, then this is really good, I can't find anything wrong with it. My only thing is, I feel like you'd benefit more asking for help in the art/animation sections on the forum, they give some good advice there. As far as the portal, I think it's better suited for completed projects. Again, this looks really good though.

[Dot Dot Dot - Animated]

Good Job

I first heard the voice track yesterday, and thought it was funny then. Finding this flash is such a bonus! Hilarious! My only issue is the music was louder than the voice at some points at the end.

Good work.

[Tea Rex]

I Liked it For Some Reason

I don't know why, but I liked it. Maybe it's because you did everything yourself or because I'd be hard-pressed to find anything like this anywhere else ... in the universe, but it's charming. And I love the ending. :)

[duck fishing]

Clever

It took me a little while to get it. Nice, I like it. Clever and funny. I think the background could have used some more detail, and the characters could have used some shading. Still, very funny. :)

[Wall of Concrete]

Good dabble into animation

I'd suggest sticking with it. There's definitely some talent here. As its own movie on newgrounds however, I don't really get the point. It's unclear exactly what's happening. That aside, the animation is smaller than the frame window. When the song loops it plays over itself. Finally, find a way to prevent the movie from looping itself over and over automatically.

riotpopper responds:

im working on the looping problem, thx for posting

[Sonic Elements - Trailer]

Intriguing

My first thought was "oh, another sprite movie", but this looks like it'll be good. Good work.

[For Craig]

I like it

Decent movie and art. I'd hate to be Craig.

TyyobrO responds:

Thanks man, but I don't know... Craig gave me a ten :)

[Sword Demonstration]

I Like the Concept

The concept is perfectly fine, but the delivery needs work.
1) There should be an option to play the entire thing instead of having to click after each scene.

2) There's white space on the edge of the frame. I'd suggest making the background stretch to all edges of the frame.

3) Sound or music would improve this quite a bit. It doesn't have to be amazing sorround sound SFX or pulse pounding thematic music or anything, but something would be nice.

4) Not everyone has super-awesome art skills, but I think the art could have been touched up a little better.

Good luck with your future movies.

[NL: Song of Storms]

Interesting Concept

I'm all for your concept, and it's clear you put a lot of time and effort into this entry. However, instead of recreating a scene, you have a short animation that loops after two seconds.

I'd suggest continuing with the idea , but presenting it as a short film instead of a short animation.

DanThelVlan responds:

That's the plan.