I enjoyed it. It was pretty funny and the art was good. The sound quality (voice acting, SFX, music) were good too. I also likedthe snow flake's eye twitch effect.
A couple of tiny things I think could have been improved:
1) The shadow from the "Clint Eastwoof's" (hilarious name by the way) drool, looked like a urine shadow, so it kind of killed the potential for a surprise when the dog actually urinated.
2) The motion tween of one of the skaters flipping looked weird, he just disappeared for a second like thin paper.
3) A little leg movement for the skaters would have mad eht eice skating scene a little better.
Still, all in all very entertaining and funny. By the way, I read your post on the BBS, way to stick to your deadline. (something I wish I could do) :)
I really appreciate the review, all of this is very helpful. Thanks!
I liked it. Short but funny. The humor was decent. My only issue is, it ended a little abruptly.
Still, good work. :)
Don't worry, i am making an animation right now! This was made a few months ago, i just decided to post this yesterday.
Ending Line = Jackpot!!
I love the look, I love the animation, the evil sounding voice, and it was hilarious! :D
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This was great in so many ways. It was basic, funny, heart warming and really makes you care about the characters too. I'm usually not much of a fan of love stories, but thoroughly enjoyed this. Plus, it could not have had a better ending. Great work!
The ending credits was really something else. I encourage anyone who just watched this to watch the end credits sequence without the text. As far as the movie itself I still can't get over "You kids and your food endorsements" Hilarious!
After checking out your most recent stuff I decided to look at some of your earlier works, like this. This is pretty funny. I like how someone can go on about something and is completely undercut by someone else. I think the ending would've been funnier if it ended at "I told you not to bleed in the car", but the trunk addition was funny on its own anyway.
"Zoning! Sleeping! Meditating! Mediating! Meteor!" I cannot get enough of this scene. I played it over at least 10 times today. Humor is a hard thing to do, since different people have varied ideas about what'd funny. So props to you guys for putting together such a solidly entertaining and funny short. I look forward to the next one and hope to see many more. Keep up the good work. Now I'm off to play that scene again.
At the risk of sounding really Sappy...
Normally I'd go over what was good and how you can improve, but Scotty covered all of that, so...
thank you :D
The "Trikz" commercial was the funniest. Comedy can be kind of hard, there were some hits and misses, but it was funny. I'm starting to like these.
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